Dream

Friend, close your eyes, I shall be born,
Show you joy, or make you forlorn,
Make your deepest desires burn,
Show you, that what you yearn,
Weave a world in me.
Open your mind now,
And I can
Set you
Free.
Dear,
Trust me,
Have no fear.
I can make you fly
If your mind be pure
I reflect only your thought,
Open your eyes and I die,
Shut them, like a phoenix I rise,
From your heart, I am born, just a dream.

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

  

68 thoughts on “Dream”

  7. hey its a beauty….nice lovely poems…hey i hve penned my 1st poem…if you could just check it out, just wanna know if i am good at poetry…here’s my blog:www.timbaktuu.blogspot.com

  8. Reverse nonnet huh?Wow! You are good at experimenting man..Seems also like an hourglass to me!Nice..Enjoyed it..The thoughts??? Felt deep this time..a hidden pain, a hidden console..Cheers!!Fiducia a.k.a Angel

  10. just loved it. it is simply wowwwwwwwww.my friend who inspired me to write nonets is after my life to write in this nonet-reverse nonet form. so happy to read urs.dreams expressed soooooooooooooooo beautifully. wat else can we expect from d greatest poet of bloggerville πŸ™‚

  17. fiducia,its a nonnet-reverse nonnet combine…yeah i am becoming better i guess..!! :)nah, its not pain…its just my interpretation of a dream!! :Dglad u enjoyed it…!!

  18. preetz, thank u! u can better mine i think…!! :)thanks for liking…u think i am greatest poet in bloggerville? thankooo…!! πŸ™‚

  20. hey tinni, even i dont like my dreams, they scare me too…!! :Dbut sometimes, friends come and help me out in dreams…!! πŸ™‚

  23. nonnet n reverse nonnet..d nonnet fever is still high!!luvd d idea of the poem..dream herself(4 me dreams r feminine) πŸ™‚

  24. yeah…beautiful structure…and if u dint ntice, the first 2 and 3rd and 4th did rhyme…that was good dude…keep it up..

  27. Wow! what I liked was the way of posting the poem-the nonnet point of course but teh shape is an hourglass which suits the poem exactly!Well done g..

  42. MAM-O-MAN!! WHAT A DEVIL YOU ARE AT RHYMING!! ACTUALLY GOD I GUESS!! AND EVEN BETTER< IT ALL MAKES SO MUCH SENSE!! WOWOWOWOWOW!!! FOR ONCE I FEEL I COULD USE A LARGER FONT TO COMMENT!! AAAAWWWEESSSOME!!And signing off, with a WOW!!, See you when I see you… πŸ™‚

  49. I just said somewhere that the verse had the quality of a dream being recounted by someone who isnt awake yet .. and I read something similar again .. beautiful..

  50. hey a nice composition..like itdo visit n comment on ama blog dear…www.arenaoflife.blogspot.comharithanote..well even i write poems dear

  62. You’re awarded,dude..didn’t you see the Leonardo shining out brightly in the award-e-gallore? πŸ˜‰

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