Friend, close your eyes, I shall be born,
Show you joy, or make you forlorn,
Make your deepest desires burn,
Show you, that what you yearn,
Weave a world in me.
Open your mind now,
And I can
Set you
Free.
Dear,
Trust me,
Have no fear.
I can make you fly
If your mind be pure
I reflect only your thought,
Open your eyes and I die,
Shut them, like a phoenix I rise,
From your heart, I am born, just a dream.
WowA nonnet and a reverse nonnet too:D:)Nice dude.:)
Yeah! Me first this time.:)
Me second AND third too:D
hmm, thanks riversoul…!! π
hahah, very funny!! :Pno competition for the first comment… my blog is good but not that good Al…!!
wowwwwwww! it’s awesome. =) keep writing.
hey its a beauty….nice lovely poems…hey i hve penned my 1st poem…if you could just check it out, just wanna know if i am good at poetry…here’s my blog:www.timbaktuu.blogspot.com
Reverse nonnet huh?Wow! You are good at experimenting man..Seems also like an hourglass to me!Nice..Enjoyed it..The thoughts??? Felt deep this time..a hidden pain, a hidden console..Cheers!!Fiducia a.k.a Angel
haha lol at riversoul…:Pbtw nice work there i too was thinking of writing abt frnds …will now write..
just loved it. it is simply wowwwwwwwww.my friend who inspired me to write nonets is after my life to write in this nonet-reverse nonet form. so happy to read urs.dreams expressed soooooooooooooooo beautifully. wat else can we expect from d greatest poet of bloggerville π
lovely structure!
ohhhhh..u mk even dreams sound lovely (i dont like dreams..they scare me :'( )
cute…!!!!loved the selection of words and the way they are woven together….!!!good going dear…!!!
ur chance for experimentation with structuresguess what they are good ;)as gud as ever – Nan
thanks xyn
gautam, i will try coming to ur poem when my exams are over…thanks for liking mine…
fiducia,its a nonnet-reverse nonnet combine…yeah i am becoming better i guess..!! :)nah, its not pain…its just my interpretation of a dream!! :Dglad u enjoyed it…!!
preetz, thank u! u can better mine i think…!! :)thanks for liking…u think i am greatest poet in bloggerville? thankooo…!! π
winnie, thanks!! π
hey tinni, even i dont like my dreams, they scare me too…!! :Dbut sometimes, friends come and help me out in dreams…!! π
hi yamini,glad u liked it…!! π
Good one, Vinay Nice structuring..wishes,devika
nonnet n reverse nonnet..d nonnet fever is still high!!luvd d idea of the poem..dream herself(4 me dreams r feminine) π
yeah…beautiful structure…and if u dint ntice, the first 2 and 3rd and 4th did rhyme…that was good dude…keep it up..
Lovely piece of writing Vinay.
ur a genius π
Wow! what I liked was the way of posting the poem-the nonnet point of course but teh shape is an hourglass which suits the poem exactly!Well done g..
wow!! you overflowing cauldron of talent. i’m jealous π
The Image is Donneian. And he is my favorite. Loved reading this poem.
very nice! great lay out!
Wow!That was a very innovative way of writing a back to back nonnet :)Beautiful!
Wow.. Fantastic lines.. :-)loved da hour glass shape of ur poem.. luks so neat.. π
lovely mate… lovely…
thanks devika!! π
thanks anwesa…!! i dint say dreams are masculine did i?? :Pglad u liked it!! π
yeah i meant it to rhyme, rajesh!! :)thanks for droppin by and complimenting!! π
not a genius chechu, u r though…!! π
m jealous of u too divvy…share that award with me!! π π
what u mean by donneian?loved that u loved the poem mampi…
hey nick, glad u liked it…!! π
hi muzer…glad u liked it…!
MAM-O-MAN!! WHAT A DEVIL YOU ARE AT RHYMING!! ACTUALLY GOD I GUESS!! AND EVEN BETTER< IT ALL MAKES SO MUCH SENSE!! WOWOWOWOWOW!!! FOR ONCE I FEEL I COULD USE A LARGER FONT TO COMMENT!! AAAAWWWEESSSOME!!And signing off, with a WOW!!, See you when I see you… π
thanq pranav!! :)glad u liked it that much, as to emphasize with capitalization!! :)thanks!! π
yaar teri poem rhym kaise karti hai bata na???:Pbohot saii hai
i dont know joie!! :)bas aise hi…!! π
Vinay! that is awesome! I love to dream! and that nonnet made me wanna dream ASAP! lol Loved it!Ne.
oh wow, thats a lovely poem. The pic is cho chweet. nice work!
man i really loved it….wish i could write a poem like u guys :(…:)….but u r awesome :)..urs..hemu..
I just said somewhere that the verse had the quality of a dream being recounted by someone who isnt awake yet .. and I read something similar again .. beautiful..
hey a nice composition..like itdo visit n comment on ama blog dear…www.arenaoflife.blogspot.comharithanote..well even i write poems dear
http://desktopsbyme.blogspot.com/Merry Christmas…!!!collect your christmas gifts from the link…!!!hope you like it…!!!
Merry Christmas, Vinay :)devika
hey, thats awesome!! π well done!!merry christmas…
hey nehya,glad u loved it… everyone almost loves to dream…!! π
hi aria,thanks for ur thoughts!! glad u liked it…
ok yamini… will come soon…
well structured post…well thought out too…
thank you for liking them…
nice dream, makes me want to dream…!! π
simple thoughts, in simple words…
Nice poem. :)Merry Xmas.
You’re awarded,dude..didn’t you see the Leonardo shining out brightly in the award-e-gallore? π
hey anu, thanks…
thanks R..
leonardo is copyright for riversoul only aayu!! :Pwill collect it soon! π
how kewt!
thanks poohi…!
Fantastically Fabulous!