Open The Mind’s Window, See The Light…

Today I shall open my window
Like a stranger you I did see
By darkness I was blinded
Now I can see thee friend
My angels guide me
Show you to me
I see light
I am
Free

*My first attempt at a nonnet. A nonnet is a literary poetic form of 9 lines consisting of 9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2 and 1 syllables respectively. It may or may not be rhyming.
*Pic: towards light by thedagger(deviantart)

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

  

73 thoughts on “Open The Mind’s Window, See The Light…

  1. great, now that i’ve made my point, here’s the real comment. BRILLIANT!perfectly written, the pattern, the theme, the concept, the picture, everything!

  2. A good beginning always sets thetone for the acts to come! Great work Leo..but wanted to ask, can you explain what a nonnet is? Is it similaar to haiku?

  3. u like my short posts i know mampi…dint know u liked to comment short too!! :)thanks for the wow!! liked it a lot!!

  4. Leo, it was fantastic! Precise and yet to the point that makes one ponder about angels or their human forms, our friends.Great going!!Secondly, I never knew what a nonnet was, but your attempt to begin one, I truly like it. Guess I too will begin something like that soon.. LOL!

  5. AHHH! That is refreshing! I really Liked that… You are a pro, even tho this is your first attempt!!!!Ne.

  6. nice..loved the first 2 lines one..its better than any longe post you could have written..youre tagged and awarded chck it out..:)

  7. Another well written work…see, now I like Nonnets as well…thanks to you, Crystal, and another blog where I read a nonnet (dont remember where :()By darkness I was blindedNow I can see thee friendMy angels guide meShow you to me…Beautiful…9 to 1….just beautiful!! Cheers!! πŸ™‚

  8. Wow! First nonnet which reallyyyy made sense to me,and touched me..FAB! =)Btw..even I wrote a nonnet..checked it?

  9. This is what the world should be doing…Open the windows of the mind to see the light within..and spread the light to the ones still living in dark…Good post, Vinaywishes, devika

  10. Hey brilliant work. It had been long time tht i had visited ur blog. Believe me this post was a treat for me. And ur blog is getting bettr day by day

  11. whoaa!!You’re damn good! how do you write such poetry, that too with some template and all?! I’ll blogroll you too… Thanks for stopping by!

  12. superb words…from the opening line, a little message begins to form… ended beautifully with the last word!! πŸ™‚

  13. simply wowwwwwwwwwwwwww :)m so happy to see nonnet spreading its wings all over.loved d spirit of the poem.n d pic too is very beautiful πŸ™‚

  14. To get freedom is not that easy and the freedom we have is easily taken for..Freedom exists but not everyone keps the window open to feel fresh isn’t it.

  15. Hi……… Absolutely fantastic post! Good job!Great! Keep writing…….Good week……… You are Welcomed to my blog…….Wishing you in advance “A Merry X’Mas and A Happy New Year”

  16. tatzz a gud one,, Vinay.. :-)infact,, i jst now posted a Nonnet.. wid “being free” as da theme.. :-)urs ,, ofcourse is better.. n lovely pic.. πŸ™‚

  17. there is no better, worse in this muzer…!! :)just helpin each other become better thats all!! πŸ™‚ ur comments and thoughts always welcome!! :)thanks for lovin it…

  18. came for a new one Leo…will come again later..btw, i have a new..come when you have time, dearand, your full name Vinay Ravindranathi used to have my name as Devika Ravindranath…love it that way, but my father liked it to be Devika Jyothi and my husband too…net effect, i don’t have a guardianship to my name!! :(kidding dear ;))wishes, devika

  19. I’m not into nonnets, as you very well know, leo:)But this one really struck a chord with me:)Nice one, dude:)And 81 comments? Now who’s d popular one, eh?:D:P:)

  20. riversoul… dont compare 82 with 106 :Pu r still popular, not sayin am not!! :Dglad it struck a chord with u though… try one sometime!! πŸ™‚

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