Innocent..

When you were taken
Against your will
A tear slid out with grace
No words could give you solace

When you were taken
The world lost a beauty
A tear slid out with lament
Forever you shall be… Innocent


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*insontis by graphicqueen91(deviantart)

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

  

66 thoughts on “Innocent..

  1. vinay, the poem is so beautiful even though i dint get the proper meaning. i was guessing so many things and 1 of my guesses was closer to it. but now after reading ur comment to divz i am finding this poem so much more beautiful, deep and meaningful. yes innocence perfectly describes a baby.:)

  2. Precise and pensive!!Too many meanings can be portrayed through these verses..It makes one’s imagination run wild.. nice and neat!!Keep it up!

  3. It suits a girl child.With female foeticide becoming common, this would be a wonderful way to put across the lament of the girl child! Wonderfully thought out Leo

  4. you know preeti and divvi made me read that and asked whats that about… and surprisingly i have got the meaning at once.. your poem is so beautiful and with such a deep meaning, really.. makes one stop and think.Very good work done πŸ™‚

  5. multiple meanings,, out thr for sure,, Vinay.. but beautifully penned.. πŸ™‚ carves a meaning at so many diffrnt relationships,, but read ur description abt baby n innocence.. :-)eternal,, indeed.. πŸ™‚

  6. ya vinay..u know wat preeti’s guess was???is it about a rose being plucked?hahahahaahahahhahahahahahahahhaand she says- my meaning got so close :Profl:D

  7. i pictured a baby that loses its life in a terror attack.. the word innocence portrayed the baby and i guess in the present scenario, that is what i thought of at first.

  8. Was it the flower you just talked of?? Or maybe it was people in general… hmm… this make more sense!! I get it!! I’m a little innocent too you know!! :PSee you when I see you…

  9. mithe,why only a girl child?? nah…its a good way to put out the cause, definite… but i was thinking of children in general!!thanks for the thoughts…!! πŸ™‚

  10. hey divz,it could portray that too!! :)even a rose being plucked… the world loses a beauty…!! :)but yeah, i dint interpret it that way…!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  11. loss of a baby’s life… however it may be, is a sad thing…infanticide or terror attack… i wanted to convey the loss being sad…! :(and ur picturing in that way also is ok divvy…!! πŸ™‚

  12. pranav…firstly, welcome to my blog!! :)i talked abt a baby…!! :)makes more sense now?? :Pwill head to ur space soon…!! πŸ™‚

  13. aria,thanks a lot…welcome back to the blogger world..hope to see a post from my fav old style poet soon…!! πŸ™‚

  14. The last two lines of the second paragraph..my loves.I like things,short and sweet..so did I like this.Kudos

  15. Ermm..I seem to never get anything in return from you (like an award)..=PLol..moophat me ! πŸ˜€

  16. mayz…its easy bro… put ur heart to it… relate with imagination!! it will be easier for u than it was for me…

  17. Hiyaa Vinay..saw ur comment on my space.. have messed up smthn sumwhr.. da non techie tat i m.. πŸ™‚ wil try n rectify it.. dunno how,, yet!!

  18. thinking of the victims? it must be hard to die when u least want it ..at least not before you’ve said a proper goodbye

  19. Wow, you have a great poetic heart! Keep it coming! Good job dear!Welcome to my blog…….Wishing you in advance “A Merry X’Mas and A Happy New Year”

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