My angel, what would I do without you?
How can I, without you live?
In you I find, every joy in life.
In the raindrops, I see your tears,
In the rose petals, I see your lips,
In my every thought, your voice I hear.
You are to me, my every heartbeat,
No star to me, brighter than you,
Iβd rather die, than see you cry,
I forget the world, when I am beside you.
My heart leaps, when our lips meet,
It is you, who makes my life complete.
Every second, without you dear,
To me, it feels like a million years.
Darling, you are the drop of rain,
That from heaven, one day did fall,
Into my eyes, engrave you I didβ¦
Now you are, always will be my all.
Forever love, you are to me,
Was, is, and always will beβ¦
The Queen of my Heart…
**From my diary, dated 14/2/2001
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*love is here by smashmethod(deviantart)
such beautiful lines…i’m sure his love will be forever π true love always is π
soooo full or pure love and. loved every bit of this beautiful-romantic poem.u wrote this in 2001?… my god!:o
Thanks for sharing your diary pages.Who would want to resist such overtures?
aww so sweet :)sooo you were in love then? π
Vinay,I am still not ok with these lines-How can I, without you live?- May be it is how can I, without you love or without your life. But life already exists in the last line. Just my thoughts buddy. Take it easy.
awwww,, sch a nice,, romantic verse.. π sounds like music to da ears,, Vinay.. nice one.. π
Ever the romantic, eh, leo?2001?Wow.Gr8 work for a 14 yr old:) Loved d pic too:)
Great Romantic piece:)
2001 eh?? well written mate π
his will always be indeed chechu!! π
preeti…!glad u loved it..!and yes, thats the date…i was a year or two into poetry those days…!! π
hey priya…nice observation,but u see, i was only 14 then….i dont think that well..!! :Dhope u liked the piece nevertheless…
hey :-),long time no see…!!glad u liked the piece!! π
ahhhhh that was beautiful!!!! simply beautiful!!!no wonder i call u d morpheus!!!ps: the new blog header rocks π
full of love :)…wen u write abt love its like reading a beautiful love stry ..:)…its just awesome yaar…:)…ur not teaching me how to rite :(…urs..hemu..
hey sid…14 yr olds can also find true love… can they not?? :oi did bro…!!
thanks standbymind,glad u liked it!! π
mayz, thanks bro…!! :)blog header, template all credit to lena!! π
romantical!! π
Ahh sweet!
hey bro can ya hav ur email id want to send and invitation.to ma blog:)
Loved your poetry. Blogrolling you!
hey rhythm…!!thanks da!! π
pj… have given u…!! π
Uh uh..so romantic, Vinay??realistic, surrealistic — what’s this romance about??But, so yound and fresh…loved it, Vinay :)wishes, devikaa small piece of advice –make sure you marry her π
A correction, Vinay** But, so young and fresh…loved it, Vinay :)**wishes, devika
marry her??? i wish devika…!! :)and the correction wasn’t necessary really… i got what u meant!! π
Are you expressing YOUR heart out here Vinay? Nice poetic way to do so Vinay
Perfect…!!!lovely lines for a lovely person from a lovely heart in this lovely world…!!!the touch of the romancethe feel of lovethe thought of beautythe dream of the heartis always specialif it for someone who is dear to youloving to your little heart…!!!
i liked the 4th stanza.. it rhyme so nice..your poem lines are sweet..
i rhyme without reason!! :Dthanks for liking it diya!! π
wow yamini…!! a poetic comment!! :Dthank u dear!!
Oooh so romantic!Nice verse π
oooh?? π thanks!! :Dthanks a lot sami!! π
how did i miss this one????/ its perfect π
perfect?? thanks farah!! π
..i’ll be ur regular reader,cuz u r simply brilliant….i hope i’ll be able to learn somethin frm ur blogs n ofcourse frm u….
@abovethanks!! π
your poems make love seem so happy…:):)i’d love to see that of it..
thanks voz… its an old one…think i showed u once, when we wr in school… but not sure…!! π