Trust In Me…

Many years ago, when I knew not my way,

You gave me a hand, that I still hold today,
You walked with me, guided me well,

Helped me chase my dreams, come out of my shell.

I was your little dream, your every hope,

I did whatever you told me to, never did I mope,
Today I know this world, better than before,
I want to fly higher, dream even more.
I loved you a lot, still do, always will,
I want to see the world, yet hold your hand still,
You showed me life till now, now let me lead,
For me to fly free, your love is only what I need.
Sweet angels from heaven, please let me fly free,
Let me find my fortune, the fair lady that waits for me,
I cannot fly, if you always lead the way,
If you tell me what to do always, not letting me have a say.
I want you still, to hold my hand,
I just want to be me, you understand,
You gave me your hand, you asked me, in you to trust,
Now I ask you the same, can’t you let me go first?


*trust by ahmetorhan

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

20 thoughts on “Trust In Me…”

  1. I always wanted, you to go firstfrom the day you first toddled on the floor..but I came behind and ran side by sideto avoid any fall when you walked or soared.The world is calling and you must go;Realize those dreams you must not forgo.But come back son when I grow oldI trust you more than I ever have told.You are still my dream You are all my hopePlease hold my handbefore I go forlorn..

  2. @manish…wow sir,that was awesome…i wrote the plea from a penned what a parent would have replied…awesome, hats off to u…

  3. every child thinks this way….and i think every parent also tought the smae way wen they were young but y dont they understand??? they taught us how to walk…y arent they letting us go anywhere we want…????they taught us how to speak…y dont they allow us to speak out their views????they taught us to read…y dont they allow us to study something we like???lot many questions this way….but no answer with any child in this world…..nicely written vinay….a feeling of the young world….keep the good work going frnd

  4. well vinay good work there ..:)..and u know wat i think ..i once posted abt the same :)..urs..hemu..u dint collect ur gift i gave out :P..

  5. u know it must be very hard to let the one u taught let go on his own ..its a test for the teacher u knoiw ..

  6. Very nice…And it comes at a critical juncture of my life too. But I am glad my parents and parents-in-law really trust us.Manish: I usually dont read comments of fellow bloggers to a post before posting mine, but yours is parallel to this comment box and couldnt resist reading it. Absolutely wonderful, and very touching.

  7. beautifully captured mate…no matter how old you get… you still need a hand now and then at times… but being free is what we all want most of the times :)have a nice weekend mate.. cheers…

  8. Fantastic…It made me feel as if my heart just penned everything that was buried inside! :)Could relate so much to it!

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