Darkness, in this world, I saw,
Where can be justice, when there is no law?
Death, pain, misery and crime,
No light could I see this time.
Human heads, by my feet they lay,
Wherever I walked, blood in my way,
I could see no evil, in their face then,
In death, the good and the evil are even.
I saw a mother, for her child, weep,
Her cries of anguish, did hit my heart deep,
An innocent life, taken, by a war again,
I could see no light, I felt only pain.
A smile, in a moment, turned to tears,
In a blink of an eye, I lost my dear,
Speeding death, took her away from me,
No one heard my cries, as I held her close to me.
No light could I see, just unending darkness,
If the world had ended, I could not have cared less,
Yet somewhere within, a little hope I felt,
I did not know why, as by her side I knelt.
It then dawned on me, how the light to see,
Only I can find the light, which is always within me.
Fight with words not
weapons, I feel this way,
weapons, I feel this way,
Why take a precious life, for you to have your say?
Spread a smile, my friend, not a tear,
Give a ray of hope, my friend, not fear,
If you don’t believe in law, what justice can you get?
Your punishment is what your crime does beget.
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*kadim_zamanlar by climates
that was beautiful! Good work! 😀
And you say that you rhyme without reason???nice one mate… enjoyed the message… thank you…Have a nice day… cheers…
Neat work!I agree with Arv..! :)Nice one.
good one :)…urs..hemu..
I agree you have reason and true! you should rename your blog rhyme with reason.
some very beautiful lines…this i hope will make the disheartened ..hopeful..
LET THERE BE LIGHT indeed!!! nicely written..as always!! whr poetry is concerned..u really cant go wrong vinay!! 😀
Nice poem! I like writing about wars too.. more of wars and history.. Keep writing.Regards,Vibushan
@ryn…thank you.
I can understand how difficult it is to rhyme lines because I write ‘sing-songy’ poetry too. This particular poem does have a singing quality in it but the undercurrent of pathos that echoes throughout the poem is just right for the topic chosen. You write beautifully! Keep up the good work!
@arv…yeah i do rhyme without reason!! :)thanks!! glad u liked it..
@hemu…thanks…!!
@nick(a&p)…rename my blog?? that would be wierd…bcoz i renamed it thrice already…but if i did, rhyme with reason ain't what i'd choose anyways…!! thanks for ur suggestion…!!glad u liked my poem…
@trinaa…never go wrong?? surely u exaggerate…!! :)thanks for liking it tinni…!!
@vibhushan…i dont really like writing on any one particular topic…whatever comes to me at that time, i pen down…!! 🙂
@kiran…i had no idea my poetry was singy-songy…!!but thanks for liking it…
gosh! it’s brilliant vinay.HOPE is what makes us alive. LET THERE BE LIGHTtake care 🙂
hey powerful lines .. U have an alter for wat ever happen without reason.
@preetilata…thanks preeti…
kudos!
Nice work Vinay. That was indeed well written.
Very neat…very beautiful…..as always…great poem….Happy Diwali
unlike others … i like your blog title as it is :Pjust another masterpiece 🙂
great piece vinu!!!!!loved it…ps: y won’t u visit my blog??? chk offlines
Socail problems are created by us and unable to justify:)
@winnie…merci…
@manish…thanks…
@diana…thanks happy diwali to u too…
@voz…thanks…
Honestly, Change ur blog nme, dudeYou DONT RHYME WITHOUT REASON!!!!!Gr8 work!!!
Leo=Vinay?I don’t know who is who ?is this leo’s blog , isnt it?
very inspiring!! 🙂