Leave Me Alone…

Leave me alone, I am not yours again to take,

Cruel devil, how could you do this to me?

I trusted you, I made that one mistake.

How could I know, that you were fake?
Past your sweet smile, my eyes could not see,
Leave me alone, I am not yours again to take.
I was asleep; you did not let me awake,
With your false promises, you did lead me,
I trusted you, I made that one mistake.
You did not take pity, my plea you did forsake,
You muffled my shouts, did not let go of me,
Leave me alone, I am not yours again to take.
That day, my innocence you did break,
You took my joys, my dreams, my purity,
I trusted you, I made that one mistake.
I cannot sleep now, every second I lie awake,
I relive the pain, which you that day gifted me.
Leave me alone, I am not yours to take.

I trusted you, I made that one mistake.

note1: this is part of my contributions for the fight against child abuse. the others are in the posts under the abuse category. it really does pain me to see an innocent life getting blemished. hopefully it will soon end.
note2: this form of poetry is called a villanelle, which consist of five tercets and one quatrain. with just two rhyme sounds and two rhyming refrains.

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*abuse by kelsey-in-wonderland.

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

  

28 thoughts on “Leave Me Alone…

  1. i dont want to know wat the poem is made with wat rymes or something…but man its cool ..:)…i really like to rite one like this for my frnds ..:)…and will do it wait :)..urs..hemu..

  2. Wow!! so you are trying different forms of poetry. Thats great.And using it for a social cause makes it even more special.Keep up the good work. ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. really painful to read it. Thats so much against humanity when things like that happen. How can one abuse innocent kids who cannot protect themselves in any way ๐Ÿ™

  4. OUCH!! HAHAH! That was really deep Vinay! I mean really! Not only the abuse of another but the abuse of oneself! So many different meanings you can pull out of this… It was great!

  5. I do like this the rhyme and the layout and I will try this form, you can see that you put a lot of work into this one! It is also good to talk about child abuse.

  6. I agree with Ne..I dint quite percieve this is as a child abuse thing, but as someone who’s trying to come to terms with his own self.Very blunt and raw for my taste though.

  7. @Ne(singlendacity)…oh…i see, i perceived the abuse of another…maybe it can do the other way too…thanks…

  8. @cin…thanks for that honest review cin…i guess there are different ways one can perceive this…like Ne said, she could perceive it in two ways…raw and blunt?? oh dear…i need to work on my poetry…hopefully the next one will be better….thnkoo…!!

  9. Hey, Nice poems! Lovely. You can express so much of emotions through poetry i guess. Am blog rolling you.Regards,Vibushanwww.thegeminimind.blogspot.com

  10. good post friend…..!!!!i got to ur post frm my frnds blog….i completely agree with you yaar….the whole world is built on a simple word “TRUST”… and if someone u loved breaks it then it seems like the whole world has left you alone….. and the whole pain is rightly ut in every word of ur poem… i am glad that i read ugood going frnd and keep blogging…..

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