Twilight’s Woes…

Two lovers I have, I know not who to choose,

At the end of a day comes one, to woo me,

His scarlet face, so serene, so handsome,

His aura, so powerful yet calm, entices me.
At the start of the night, comes the other,
He wants me, to be his always,
He is divine, his light does show the way,
Yet I do not know if we are meant for each other.
The powerful sun, or the moon so divine,
With whom shall I go, whom should I claim as mine?
I am stuck between them, as God well knows,
Why can’t he hear, this poor twilight’s woes?





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Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

28 thoughts on “Twilight’s Woes…

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  1. ahaa lovely… hope god resolves ur conflict soon.powerful sun or d divine moon??… i guess u deserve a Star who shines on its own light :)take care 🙂

  2. I’d go with the sun. . . . .Its the sun, without who’s beautiful and awe inspiring rays of sunshine, the moon would be nothing but an ugly piece of rock orbiting the 3rd rock from d sun.:)Nice lines.:)

  3. :)This is going to be for every poem u wrote, when i was missing…I’m totally running out of words vinu… Your poems leave speachlees… I wish I could express everything i felt this beautifully!!!Like i always say… “Beautiful vinu!!!!”

  4. nice one mate… but I guess you can never appreciate the one without another :)have a nice day… take care.. cheers….

  5. @aayui had exceeded bandwidth so my sis had posted this for me…i’ll take it up next post pukka…do come back and tell me how the poem has come out…

  6. Twilight has to choose between both..haha..:)If it chooses then its no longer a “twi” light..So even if it is a sorry plight,It has no other way but to go with both..

  7. wwooo hoooo Vinay! I liked this.. and Also what Arv said.. hard to have one without the other! Well ummmmmm maybe! I dunno! hahahahahahah Nice!

  8. this reminds me of a mallu song…actually its one of ur faves i think…nice that u drew inspiration from it!! 🙂

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