My Dear Dearest…

A friend of mine, few days ago, posed a question to me,

It took me back, to those days of yore, of blissful memories,

She and I, by the river bend, in the shade of a tree,

Dreaming of years with each other, setting our hearts free
Every second, with her, like a treasure I did cherish,
Every minute, without her, I felt I would soon perish,
To spend a day, without her, I did not want to try,
I had felt, than losing her, I would rather die.
Our love, was not torn apart, by my worries, my fear,
Each moment we spent together, our love became dear,
Not I moment with her, shall I ever even regret,
She is with me always, a treasure, I shall never forget.
What is love, if you want her, to live only for you?
Love is when, you let her fly, do what she wants to do,
When you know, that you are there, always in her thought,
That you are, who she loves best, who she cares for a lot.
If it is true love, then you need not fear, for she wanted you,
You have found indeed, that special one, that little drop of dew.




My love did not last forever, heaven she went to see,

In a moment, that smile I had, did become misery,

I cannot believe she is gone; she will never come back to me,

Yet to me, she always will be a blissful memory.


(This work, is dedicated to her. When LukkyDivz asked “Is it ok to have negative emotions in love, i got reminded of my own fear when I was with her and also of her memories. Thanks for that. It makes me both sad and happy when I think of these memories!)

Pic: sweet innocence by palewyntergirl

Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

31 thoughts on “My Dear Dearest…

  1. What is love, if you want her, to live only for you?Love is when, you let her fly, do what she wants to doawesome vinay! Dont know what to say, ๐Ÿ™ you are a true brave heart, and believe me few people are able to love the way you did ๐Ÿ™‚ that makes u a special person :)thanks for the link to my blog :Plol

  2. Each moment we spent together, our love became dear,only line that made me think if i had a gf wat wud be the scene like…gud work ….u copied my idea of love :P…just kiddin ..any tips how to improve mine :)..urs..hemu..

  3. btw vinay, the link i was talking about was the one u gave here in this post – the inspiration behind the post ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  4. only line that made me think if i had a gf wat wud be the scene likeu will soon if u havent one now..(i have my doubts abt that btw…!!)thanks for ur words hemmzy…

  5. tat was such a touching post vinay …it shows tat ..the emotion of love is so dear to all human beings.**Love is when, you let her fly, do what she wants to do,tats so true!!

  6. letting go ..i told lucky divz ..u have to even though it gives u butterflies …the fear of losing is 2 great..and hero …flat on ur poetry once again

  7. love is abt giving,not getting.u xplored this thot beautifully.i loved the line:love is when,you let her fly,do what she wants to do

  8. Ahem….Being a little love-lorn again, are we?The poem’s as good as ever!!Tell me,Why do people fail to see what you’ve so well envisioned untill its too late?

  9. riversoul…not forlorn over love…rather on memories of my sweetie…thanks for ur words…as for ur question…l8r i’ll answer not now…

  10. Loved these lines the best:What is love, if you want her, to live only for you?Love is when, you let her fly, do what she wants to doIt means so much to let the loved one be.

  11. What is love, if you want her, to live only for you?Love is when, you let her fly, do what she wants to do,“Nice lines.. i liked the way think of love.. Grt work..

  12. I never fell in love..duh me! :DBut..what you said,ahaan..I won’t disagree.Once again,well put up..and a good stringing of words!hope yu’ve got yr special someone ๐Ÿ˜‰

  13. hey sneha(solitaire), thank u for ur hug…!! :)its been a while since she went, am still havin memories and i guess i always will have!

  14. Nicely weaved lines, vinay. :)Am so sorry for your loss.But am sure, where ever she is, she will be proud and happy about you, for treasuring your memories so indelibly..very touching..

  15. “What is love, if you want her, to live only for you?Love is when, you let her fly, do what she wants to do,When you know, that you are there, always in her thought,”Beautiful!!! I’m excessively possessive… this struck me most.

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