Tell me…
What did I do wrong?
Did I shout, make you feel left out?
What did I do, friend?
That in our friendship, you now doubt.
Tell me…
What did I do, friend?
Did I in your secrets pry, ever make you cry?
What did I do wrong?
That you have gone away, without saying goodbye.
Tell me…
What did I do wrong?
Did I forget to say, I love you every day?
What did I do, friend?
That you have left me, in darkness this way.
Tell me…
What did I do, friend?
Was I not there, when you were in despair?
What did I do wrong?
That you go away, this is just not fair.
Tell me…
What did I do, for you not to speak?
Your silence is my misery, just a few words I now seek.
Please come back, we can work things out,
I can’t stay like this, forever in doubt.
Come to me, tell me my mistake,
Without your voice, my heart does break.
Come take my hand friend, can you not forgive?
Because without your friendship, I just cannot live.
Tell me…
Pictures:
top: lost memories by liosarmiento
bottom: friends by ssilence
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Someone said that we shouldnt shrink ourselves to help others expand.Remember ?
does friendship end with death?
@mampi…yeah i do remember… but well, am lost without knowing why the friendship has fallen away…
@anwesa…no indeed, it is reborn after continuation in heaven…
lovely and a touchy poem. many a time it happens that our loved ones leave us without saying anything and we keep wondering “why?”… it hurts very badly and deeply. but then again life goes on….take care:):):)
I think some good memories are left to remember forever.
good…it has lots of feel..:)..i to want to rite rhymes but cant..help me out :)..urs..hemu..
Nice rhyming poem and neat photos!
Its painfull, yes, but dwelling on a wayward relationship only causes more pain and rage. Just let go, mate. :)Well written. Loved it.:)
Its painfull, yes, but dwelling on a wayward relationship only causes more pain and rage. Just let go, mate. :)Well written. Loved it.:)
written wth so much of emotion and feeling a lovely piece of work indeeddo u require my praise wen such good poets of blogsville hav appreciated u.
so filled wth pathos..touched me..
A very touching post….But u know what..ur frnd would come back to u if he feels the same what u feel for him.
yeah….life does go on eventually…!! u too take care…thanks for visiting preetilata, do come again.
yup, memories are always there, but reality sometimes is better…
wont let go yet riversoul…thanks…!!
thanks pooja…
sometimes.. its better not to know..
u found out yet?? 😛