A Day That Is Me….!!

Tagged by:Mampi
Tag Task: Answer the question “What sort of a day would you want to be?”
Requested Reply Format: Poetry?? My pleasure Mampi…hope it comes out well…!!!

I would want to be, a rainy day,
When little children, come out and play,
With many a smile, not a sorrow,
Rain on them joys, a better tomorrow

When little rivers, begin to flow,
For little paper boats, to race afloat,
To clean the air, of so much dust,
What the wind can’t do, with a powerful gust

When farmers have sown, they call me,
To shower on the seeds, that gives food aplenty,
That saves a life, from dying of drought,
I want to be, the rain they sought

When lakes and wells, dry in summer heat,
To make them full, they I must meet,
To give the water, when it is needed most,
To give the hope, when all seems lost

When gardens dry, scorched by the sun,
To nourish them back, I am the one,
The sun can shine, after I go,
As after the rain, does come the rainbow

Heat of summer, or winter chill,
Beautiful spring, or autumn still,
Rather than these, I really must say,
What I really want to be, is a rainy day


I tag: Priya,Divya,Matangi,Winnie,Priya Joyce and Gagan
I request Priya and Winnie
to do the tag, in their poems blog in their brilliant poetic fashion as usual…

Divya,Matangi,Priya-J and Gagan, however you want to…!!

Pic Credit:
DeviantArt’s Trishvandenberg for the rainbow.
Google for the paper boat.

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

29 thoughts on “A Day That Is Me….!!”

  1. wow…awesome dude…..i hardly admire poetic versions….but ur’s is very nice…rhyme is perfect…..cheers…keep blogging,saravan

  2. Now this is a masterpiece in itself. Excellent, Beautiful. Just loved it.BTW, I am first time visitor here and this poem has inspired me to read every single word on your blog. Brilliant!

  3. Well done, Vinay.Lets see if i can top that!I’ve already done 2 tags in 2 days, so it’ll be a while bfore i work on this one.But rest assured, my competetive spirit prevails, brother.:)Love this tag.Thanks to mampi for tagging me too.:)

  4. wow vinay… every post is better than the previous one! kudos genius! :)thanks for tagging me.. i like it.. will do it right away..

  5. Thanks for the tag brother….I really appreciate it….Anyway, the write up was again amazing….and yes, you sure are Bloody Brilliant! πŸ˜‰

  6. The urge to get back to the impish days is so strong in our sub-conscious and conscious as well…that on every chance given n every pretext taken we wanna return back to them !!You have potrayed it well !!

  7. poetry was sure brill! :)n wht day i d want to be?! need to think real hard! ll do it.. can t be sure whn.. bt ll do! πŸ™‚

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