I am lost, my dreams seem afar,
No light can I see, to lead me,
I can hear, nervous silence,
My heart, threatens to stop,
My path I am unable to see.
Many hands I can feel, holding mine,
Yet I am scared, I know not whom to trust,
I am not finished, with my quest,
A hurdle, I find always in my way,
I only want victory, it is a must.
From a babble of voices, I hear,
A strong voice, urging me on,
Listen to me, it said,
Trust me; I know what is best,
I know you, I am not wrong.
So I’ll listen, to it now,
I will not give up, ever,
I will listen, to my heart,
Do what I want, for sure,
I can & I will, that’s my mantra forever.
Pic Credit:-Jörg Kahlhöfer
(The first two verses are how a friend has been feeling for the last few days… the last verse is how I want him to feel…I think he values my words… so these are my words for him….)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
When you say I can and I will it can change anybody’s life. Nice.
This is so beautiful, Vinay.I’m sure your friend is very lucky to have a guide like you to inspire him.:)Beautiful words.Nice pic too.
Lovely!You are such a thoughtful friend 🙂
Very inspiring vinay..It inspired me too!
Beautiful vinu…It makes me wanna change something in me…You are a gr8 friend!good job!:)
I too wrote something a while back on similar lines, only difference was my friend came to my rescue.. :-)It truly is a blessing to have sch frnds in life who can give direction n ur mantra "i can & i will" definitely is d way of life.Beautiful composition.. 🙂
Its very different and thats good!
i hope everyone gets friends like this…
nice..best wishes.. MIP
S vinay ts been a while since i last posted. Thanku for the warm welcome 😉
And a beautiful piece of poetry this is 🙂 very prfound
nice & inspiring..& a pic to match to the theme of the poem.. 🙂
@priya:yeah…thanks…@riversoul:who knows sid?!!@sameera:thanks sami…!!@diya:glad u were inspired!!@voz:thanks as always..!!
@ 🙂 :yeah it is, i agree with u…and thanks..!!@art&poetry:thanks nick…!! do visit again!!@divya::) thank u…!@MIP:thank you MIP!!@nan:yeah welcome back… & thanks!!@suhani:thanks..!!
I believe man is the architect of his own destiny…tell your fren no one else can carve it for him !And this was a lovely verse dear.
ah! this is very you.. very positive!
I too will listen and never give up just as you have urged… your poems are delicious…