Tied down by a force, I know not what to do,
Free me from these chains, that bind me.
Lead me to the light, unbind my thoughts,
From the darkness, release me.
I can’t walk alone, I am scared for me,
I dream of a hand, pulling me back and hurting me,
I am like a bird, caged for life,
I need to spread my wings, fly free.
It has been a time long, since I saw the blue sky,
Felt a drop of rain, slide down my cheek,
I want to walk alone, without fear,
But if this is the future, that possibility is bleak.
It is time for a change, I can feel it,
Take away the fear, from my heart,
To the future, let us look,
It is time, for a new start.
Its the freedom of self, soul and being happy isn’t it.Beautiful lines.
Its the freedom of self, soul and being happy isn’t it.Beautiful lines.
Its nice to see gr8 poets in making. Your poem strikes chords. Gr8 work. Keep it up dude:) π
Its nice to see gr8 poets in making. Your poem strikes chords. Gr8 work. Keep it up dude:) π
Hey what a coincidence !!I was feeling the same today eveningUr lines were written as if u read my mind today . cud relate a lot
Hey what a coincidence !!I was feeling the same today eveningUr lines were written as if u read my mind today . cud relate a lot
Beautiful!The pain is palpable in the verse.May the new beginning open many doors π
Beautiful!The pain is palpable in the verse.May the new beginning open many doors π
Amen, to your new start.
Amen, to your new start.
wonderful verses :)There is always time for new start, one should only be strong enough to get over the past and start a new life
wonderful verses :)There is always time for new start, one should only be strong enough to get over the past and start a new life
Hi ,I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don’t you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog βI Rhyme Without Reasonβ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run http://www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)Cheers,
Hi ,I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don’t you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog βI Rhyme Without Reasonβ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run http://www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)Cheers,
thanks priya…!
thanks priya…!
glad u could relate to it..u know what they say L… gr8 minds think alike…!! π
glad u could relate to it..u know what they say L… gr8 minds think alike…!! π
thx mampi…
thx mampi…
i donno if my posts are wow…! thanks for the praise…will visit the site soon…
i donno if my posts are wow…! thanks for the praise…will visit the site soon…
yuppie for the 50th post …and sweet little poem ..i wish i had that much inspiration around me π
yuppie for the 50th post …and sweet little poem ..i wish i had that much inspiration around me π
hey farah… thanks for the comment yaar… but u clicked on wrong link to comment lolz…!! π
hey farah… thanks for the comment yaar… but u clicked on wrong link to comment lolz…!! π